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Posted on May 15, 2011 at 7:36 AM



Today's Six comes from an un finished WIP its the first opening lines of the book. I think it pretty much speaks for itself... The heroine is Vivian and she's waiting for her target. 

 

Fuck Reverend Mother, damn woman always hands out the impossible missions. That was the thought that played in Viv’s head while she laid interjacent the bushes and waited for her mark. Sergei, the giant ass Russian with a taste for drug trafficing and arms dealing, the fucker never kept to a schedule, it was hard to track his big hairy ass down, still she waited. The scabrous ground was unyielding and sharp, thorns from the bushes proded and poked her skin, the weight from her Tac 2 wasn’t heavy, she could easily pack up and head off into the night if the situation called for it.

Fuck! She had an itch, right in the middle of her spine and she wouldn’t move to placate it. The feeling of ants marching up her spine, dancing right over the spot she couldn’t reach,made her tense.

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12 Comments

Reply Layna Pimentel
09:53 PM on May 16, 2011 
Hmm she sounds a little on the ornery. Love it. What I don't love is the ants. ewww

;-)
Reply Ginger Simpson
09:07 AM on May 16, 2011 
Made me itch. Nothing like a dominant woman and ants to grab one's interest.
Reply Luxie Ryder
03:31 AM on May 16, 2011 
Reading about those ants made my neck itch! Great opening.
Reply Lindsay
09:10 PM on May 15, 2011 
Now that's one hell of a woman.
Reply lexcade
08:07 PM on May 15, 2011 
oh, girl's got moxie. I like her! ;)
Reply JoAnne Kenrick
06:55 PM on May 15, 2011 
Love it... and ewww army of ants marching up her spine. I'm shivering all over now!
Reply Allure Van Sanz
06:42 PM on May 15, 2011 
This excerpt made me antsy. LOL Good job.

Best,
Allure
Reply Gem Sivad
03:38 PM on May 15, 2011 
Hate that "can't move but I have to moment." Great six!
Reply Jessica Subject
02:33 PM on May 15, 2011 
Seems like such an uncomfortable situation. She is very patient. I wonder what she will do when he arrives.
Reply Taryn Kincaid
02:25 PM on May 15, 2011 
Oooooh. Helluva badass. Getting a great Femme Nikita vibe!
Reply jovial
01:49 PM on May 15, 2011 
Vivian seems a tad annoyed.
Reply Jessica Knauss
12:57 PM on May 15, 2011 
What a strong character! Wow.

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